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From Band 6.5 to 8: IELTS Writing Makeover

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I took my exams on 21st June, I failed writing. I hope this helps me improve

— @johnsarauniyaelizabeth

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Watch as we help Isha improve her IELTS Writing Task 2 score from Band 6.5 to Band 8 with simple changes.

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In this interactive lesson, you'll see each step of her writing makeover and choose what happens next.

It's an easy and enjoyable way to improve your writing skills too.

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She looks like indian actress Amrita Rao

— @naqshnaz3811

IMPORTANT- The essay below is not her final Band 8.0 essay. You must watch the whole video to understand what the essay below is and how to use it to improve it to an 8.0.

👇 FULL ESSAY:

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I have exam on June 27th.

— @taslimakhanamshorna7443

Many toddlers use phones for an extended period of time on a daily basis. This is because parents nowadays want to keep their toddlers entertained, and this could be a positive thing because toddlers can use it to access educational apps.

Parents use phones to entertain their toddlers. This is because parents can’t find the time to finish their tasks because they are consumed with looking after their toddlers. That is why they give them mobile phones to keep them occupied so that they can finish whatever it is that they need to do, without being distracted by their child. Many parents need to cook meals for their families which requires time and attention, and that is why they give phones to their toddlers to keep them occupied so they can finish up without interruptions or distractions.

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— @minhtuoibach

There are a lot of learning opportunities on the internet that can help toddlers cognitive development. This can be positive because, while the child is occupied, he or she is also learning something that interests them and helps in their development, for example they can access to educational apps which have lessons and topics directed towards toddlers learning and toddlers can use this to learn objects or colors or different types of foods and much more, hence the time they are looking at the phone is not wasted.

In conclusion, parents nowadays prefer giving mobile phones to their child to keep them occupied, and it can be a good thing because it can also help the child’s development positively through learning and educating themselves.

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can some one help me answer this question

Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends.

How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives?

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

— @pranaja8122

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I am on very intial stage for the preparation of IELTS Test. I need to improve my all skills reading,writing,speaking and listening.I am stuck with this from where should I start, If someone can guide me I would really thankfull

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More User Perspectives

Do they give you the essay format in the exam ?

@Jean69100

Please take me through my preparing for IELTS

@GloryMbi

My own paraphrasing of the question.

Some children between the ages of 1-3 years are using moblie devices each day for several hours

Chris, please how is it

@ChinecheremObetta-m8n

THANK YOU SIR!!!. I was actually scared because my IELTS is just a day away and i just scored 5.5 in my writing.After seeing ur videos i got to know how to write well to get at least band 8. once again thankyou sir!!

@SGC_01

Watched this video and got an 8.5

@davidsarpong7681

In my mock test I generally get 8 in reading and listening. But I get 5 or 5.5 in writing. I am getting so frustrated for this and losing motivation 😢

@sanjidaafrinlima-0737

i love it❤

@Victoriaconqueror12345

It was sooo effective for me
Thanks a lot❤
Especially my IELTS exam is coming up soon

@itsnarsiss_design

I don't need 8/9 6.5 enough for me ,currently my level only 5 ,what I to do for boost my band score 5 to 6.5 . I need help

@LikhonAyan-g6d1s

Teacher Chris, I admire all your videos. Thanks a bunch for teaching us.

@GulshadMammadova-n5b

I got my ielts academic score 8.5 overall

@ParmeetRozera

My tomorrow is tomorrow wish me luck guysss 🫠🫠🫠🫠

@RayhonAmetova-b7o

I have my test tomorrow wish me luck guys I’m a bit nervous!!

@-mai-8325

Children between 1-2 years of age nowadays use cellphones for long periods on daily basis

@chudyimanuel3214

Thank you for the great content!

@thuydieu4266

Please is this for general or academic exams

@nwanyambelinash1062

I got my results yesterday. I have to admit that due this video I got so much clarity on the structure of the essays, I could focus more on content, grammar and spellings errors. His writing and speaking videos are gem. I got
Listening- 7
Reading - 7
Writing- 6.5
Speaking- 7

I was so poor at writing and speaking. For Listening and Reading it just depends on few techniques and alot of practice.

Thank you I got the band I wanted 🎉🎉.

@groot1111-k2r

My test is tomorrow. Binging all this content and practicing has helped so much. Wish me luck!

@Housecat-Corner

Gemini provided overall 5.5 on your essay .

@MDRoni-sc5zr

16:31 Some - Many -> isn't that supposed to change the entire Structure? "Some" has Synonyms of Few, Few many. While "Many" indicates towards a more Majority view?

@Evil_Lady_Yami

When i wrote an essay on this topic by myself, following this structure ChatGPT rated it as 6, then i copy pasted the example that you provided it gave me 6.5. So, idk now, is ChatGPT not reliable🥲

@idkmansomeone

The Question is "why is this the case" which is toddlers using mobile phones, and not why parent allows them to use it.

@AfrotalesbyUU

She has Nepalese accent.

@razzpokhreal

Thank you chris i js got my writing task 2 kinda similar to dis one but its abt watching tv

@sp3ncer_h4yes

In intro we can use smartphones over mobile phone?

@Meerab_pk

Just got my test result today. I got overall 7. Although it wasn't my desired score, i wanted to get 8.0 band but I'm still happy i was able to get 7 with only 1 week of preparation. Really want to thank you. your videos really helped! I only had about 1 week and some days, around 4–5 hours total prep because of work, so I focused mainly on your content.

I attempted different mock tests and honestly I felt those were easier than the real exam. It was my first attempt, so I got nervous and made some mistakes in Reading and Listening, even though I feel my level there is closer to Band 8.
Planning to retake in 2–3 months to improve, especially in Speaking. Thanks again!

@SARAH-vh7jg

Why have you not addressed the other side of the question?

@paulgicheru8815

Watching this video before 4 days of my exam wish me luck

@jayavarthinis-csection3496

My exam is 22nd april 2026, wish me luck

@larakenya.

How many words we need to write

@GunishaManoja-e7m

i have an ielts test on 23/4 april, i scored 7.5 overall on my last test so wish me luck so i can get 8.0+, istg i will manifest

@tsukiko_amari

I got 7.5 band score with only 3 weeks of preparation!

Thanks for your content! It was very useful ❤

@yuliafedun1021

I'm going to take my test tomorrow. Wish me the best please ☘️

@ariadnaluna4833

Hi everyone, I wonder which one is easier in writing or generally having the computer test or physical test? Can we calculated our words easily on computer test?
(You can correct my grammar mistakes, i would be appreciated! 😂)

@melahatyavuz3108

I did the same thing in my mock test but my tutor told me it's too simple we need to add global perspective what should I do now 😅

@SuminaShrestha-x4i

Isha is bad

@blade7031

Tomorrow is my exam let’s see what happens.

@op_nandita9307

The jump from 6.5 to 8 is almost never about grammar rules. It's about phrasing. At 6.5 you're writing correct English. At 8 you're writing natural English. The difference is subtle but examiners pick up on it immediately. This is the exact problem I kept running into which is why I built BeLikeNative as a solo project. You write a sentence, hit one keyboard shortcut, and it rephrases it the way a native speaker would. Using it as a daily practice tool where you compare your version to the native version is what actually trains your ear for that Band 8 naturalness. I'm the developer so obviously biased, but the concept matters more than the specific tool.

@MichalBrighton

i like this so much im watching today

@GabrielleLouiseAleria

What about correcting ourselves many times making mess ‏on the writing paper .Does that affect the score in the exam ?
This might happen when we try to replace vocabulary, some ideas or even grammar mistakes.

@DANASD-p6e

Thank you sir so much

@SonamSherpa-u7j

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