DAWN OF THE EMPIRE (A Star Wars prequel fanedit) revision
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Edits are listed below disclaimer..
Newest version with several changes and shorter running time is here. For some reason I can't get permission to post it on youtube, but it seems to stream ok with the link. All disclaimers apply. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1n2Tuh6t01mkcU6tqndqthUAjKpQLKbn9/view Main changes. Reinserted edited elevator ride with Obi-wan and Anakin before they meet Padme. Solved following continuity problems 1) Have injured Obi-wan being carried to the bridge of the ship that is landed at the start of ROTS. More Obi-wan dialogue post landing. 2) Show Dooku trying to escape on speeder with the ships and Anakin and Obi-wan spotting him to show how they got separated from Yoda.
Removed things not essential to the plot the or already shown in another capacity and cleaned up some conversations with edits I overdid and where there was a simpler solution. Example start of Anakin/Palpatine concert scene to get Anakin in the seat. Other changes include editing post Shmi death where it just pans down as if she is looking down on Anakin at the funeral instead of the conversation with Padme where he says the exact same thing he says at the grave. I like that scene but I felt my initial edit didn't work due to the camera angles. Edited start of Obi-wan interrogation with Dooku to skip the line about "oh no there must be a mistake". Cleaned up post Mace Windu death so that the first thing on Anakin's mind is Padme, since that is the major catalyst for him turning to the dark side. Removed Dooku flip and line about Sith Lords being Obi-wan's specialty since he's kind of have a tough time with them so far. I think Obi-wan had enough flair without that line and Dooku is more intimidating without the flip.
Other than that just transition fixes. This will probably be the last edit as I am really happy with it other than the scrolling intro. I should have made it more flowery, but I kept it real simple because I know some people have a hard time reading it. I should have put something like "While battle rages in the skies above, Darth Maul hunts Queen PADME AMIDALA below" Then next paragraph "Answering the child Queen's pleas for help Jedi Master Qui Gon Jinn and young Obi-Wan Kenobi have arrived from Tatooine" The rest was fine.
Anyways thanks for all the kind comments and I hope you had fun watching the edits. I think George Lucas is a great man and I always loved the world building and imagination him and his team showed in these movies. I tried to keep the shots with his daughter in as well since I feel they were very important to him and maybe why he decided to make these movies and why older people thought they were a bit flawed. He was a father and like all fathers he wanted to make his kids happy. For children I think the prequels are great as is and I think when he started the prequels kids were his main target audience. While a lot of us were older and there when the OT came ( I still remember watching both Empire and ROTJ at the theater and crying with others when Yoda died) , many kids loved the prequels growing up and it was only when they got older they wished they were a little different. I think he tried to listen to the fans as well on Revenge of the Sith.
This man meant a great deal to us growing up. Not just in movies but in video games and pioneering sound and tech. My first big paycheck as a young man I went out and bought a THX certified Carver Power Amplifier. I grew up on the Lucas Arts adventure games. I hope that people are now beginning to understand how much a part of him was in Star Wars. When Jamie Lannister (Tyr) who is essentially Anakin Skywalker, has his arc finish in Game of Thrones I hope they appreciate the prequel trilogy for doing it first. Maybe people will also notice JK Rowling copied all the story beats from the OT for Harry Potter. Thank you George Lucas and the Lucasfilm team for everything.
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EDITS: (minus things that are just rearranged or omitted as 5 hours of movies are cut here). Revision. Removed error with a double scene, new edit Geonosis. Changed romance/song scene a bit. Cleaned up many transitions.
THE PHANTOM MENACE: Short line from Obi-Wan from Episode 4 (as this should be viewed in Machete Order and after Vader claims he is Luke's father) about the old republic before custom opening crawl to clear up questions people might have about how Anakin got into space on a ship. Edited space battle with Maul fight as the start of the film. Maul fight music before Obi-wan engages Maul made more primal from original soundtrack. Edited Darth Sidious scene from earlier in original film to make it clear he is behind this. Anakin gives Padme his carving before he leaves Naboo to begin his Jedi training while Padme looks to be dressed incognito visiting his departing ship. Anakin's departing conversation with his mother occurs as a flashback MUCH later and during Attack of the Clones timeline after vision about his mother.
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ATTACK OF THE CLONES: 10 years later text added at start of film. Changed alien text to make it clear Padme is the ex Queen when introduced with Palpatine, which could be confusing. Heavily edited assassination attempt, music and sound during it and car chase. Edited bar scene to make it feel a little more exciting. Added deleted scene with Obi-wan and dart to transition to shortened diner scene. Edited later romantic scenes with music from the soundtrack. It works visually without the dialogue. Anakin never mentions he hates Sandpeople children or that he killed them to Padme and instead promises her he will be the most powerful Jedi ever, before breaking down and crying. Star Wars sad medley is played over it while Padme comforts him. This is again to make the love story more believable. Assembly line scene is skipped, with Jango capturing Padme/Anakin. Padme's love confession before arena event is edited and shorter. Arena event is HEAVILY edited and shortened to be more of a rescue from Mace Windu. There is only one creature that is there because Jango Fett kills it. Yoda does not fight Dooku as it never made sense to me from a Sith/Jedi power level perspective. He is also old and his fight with Palpatine should be seen as a last ditch effort, which is why he has to go into exile.
REVENGE OF THE SITH: Three years later text before film. Edited space battle to be MUCH shorter and a little comic relief from Artoo as the gates to the ship where Palpatine is being held close. Artoo whistles to let Anakin/Obiwan know he can take them to Dooku. Crash landing made a little more exciting/shorter. Palpatine's talk with Anakin at concert edited to remove Midicholorians/Grievous and other repetition. Palaptine attacks Mace Windu and company faster with his first strike after landing, so it looks like they had no time to react. Removed Palpatine's message to Mustafar and dialogue before Anakin kills them because it made no sense. Anakin should believe he is doing "good" in a twisted way, by assassinating separatists, which a Jedi would never do. I believe he would find out later the Emperor played him for a fool, but it is too late to change the past. Anakin on Mustafar and Emperor's speech edited together and shortened with multiple video tracks. Anakin no longer says "you will try". Yoda Palpatine fight shortened and Yoda no longer looks up after he falls with disdain for emperor. Yoda doesn't say he must go into exile immediately. He just says he failed. Anakin/Obi-wan fight on tower shortened with Obi-wan swinging to the small platform in the lava immediately. Leia's name not revealed for Machete Order purposes. Vader's first breath is Padme's last breath. Ending with TFA trailer music and video mostly synced to things happening on screen.
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@신주혁Why would you edit out Anakin saying "You will try" after Obi-Wan said "I'll do what i must"
@johnstrika9170Is this the edit that Topher Grace (Eric from that 70s show) made?
@eshep71We are so lucky George Lucas allows these fanedit films..
@KinoosaoSaskWhat? You took out the Anakin being denied the rank of master scene?
How can you do this? This is outrageous. It's unfair.
Take notes, Mr. Lucas. This is how you make a decent prequel.
@sexobscuraBro you have a clone army being produced by the genetics of a bounty hunter.
It was ordered 10 years before by a jedi who was murdered after.
Kamino has been erased from the data
Freakin dooku told obi wan that the senate is controlled by a sith lord named sidious.
is this monetized? how are there ads?
@dicepineconeI am still disappointed that they made Anakin into Darth Vader
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@inesborstel5592I preferred the longer version.
@MikeAnstis-t9dI still question this…how the fuck does Obi-Wan win against Maul without the high ground??? Do the Sith just not know how to beat someone in a duel when they have the high ground or the low ground??? lol
@bartome7oIs thid tropher grace cut ?
@FAYAZ97FLUB? Sidious' saber went out the window first, but he has the same one (or duplicate?) during his fight with Yoda. Of course, he must of had back up generic sabers, but not duplicates of the same design. At least, from what I know of Legends lore. He used two sabers during his fight with Maul and Oppress and they seem real generic compared to his main one.
@dethbolt000Thank you! You fixed the romane scenes! They really work now! Better pacing, great editing, you sir are a master!
@ednguyen3822Dumb
@tomjordan3086Did anyone ever notice in the final scene that Tattoine has an awful lot of clouds (moisture) for a desert planet with two suns?
I just noticed that for the first time.
The sunset looks gorgeous, but probably not very realistic.
Can you upload the full movie of Revenge of the sith? Or at least a google doc of it?
@darklordmalthric3633A lot of TPM shouldn’t have been cut
@goblue193That's fkd up they use sand as soap in Tatooine . Rubbing my balls the wrong way would turn me to the dark side as well .
@ChayadaKwanjaiThis is a fake taken from the original and very poorly put together. Stop wasting people's time, Looser! 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
@CarlosDasilva-z5khow dare you skip yoda vs dooku
@ggghhh5617You left out way too many important parts for meaningless ones anakin telling padme how he slaughtered all the sand people is one example amung several others. I didn't like it.... Nice try though.
@bigcarlinblick904Damn they should’ve gave obi one corn rolls and the dreads
@sergiotorres1069This would be a future timeline for earth had Germany won WW2 a thousand years later..
@studio999xAll your deeds are triple rogue, bastardized, evil, and wicked. How can you possibly lead?
@GlobalJustice-vp2xuIt will be the dawn of the Kingdom of Light, not of darkness. If you claim to be from the kingdom of God in Christ, then you must align yourself to God and His divine order.
@GlobalJustice-vp2xuIf none of these other spoiled children will say it, I'd like to thank you for this content.
@marcusbrothers5221Yo,shut the hell up,it's free!
@marinowilsonjoemamaWhat Anakin failed to realize was that when he gave into becoming a Sith. He lost his humanity. Stupid little fool, paid for what he bargained for.
@garystiegelmeyer4366Wow
@XiaKediBest part of whole movie cut out fighting big arena monsters
@TimothyTopitzhoferSeeing Natalie Portman is that white skin tight outfit 😍reason enough to watch.
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@sonnymolina8748This is really solid. Definitely will show this to my friends.
@medsguy9008Super good movie 😊
@gouthamangouthaman9158If only Snikin waited out to be appointed as a Jedi Master. Padme dying at childbirth must have been a huge factor too.
@lucindairis1897Its fantastic ❤🌹
@lucindairis1897Anikin was trailblazing in Tattooine. One Wan Kanoebe ❤🌹
@lucindairis1897Thank you. ❤🌹
@lucindairis1897Padme was there Thankfully ❤🌹
@lucindairis1897How sad for Anakin’s mother’ burial ❤️🌹
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